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Post by lunaria on Apr 3, 2006 16:40:23 GMT -5
The Fourth Of July So this is the fourth of July The noisiest day of the year Explosions and sparkles and apple pie And hot dogs, hamburgers and beer
People heading for camp sites Cars piled high with tents and boats Lotion for sun burn and skeeter bites Tubes and stuff, as long as it floats
Sun high in the sky beating down Waves lashing the shore People lying on white, hot sand turning brown This is the way of July four
July four is ruled by the moon A day when people laugh and are gay A three day vacation, over too soon And July four is my BIRTHDAY!
Copyright © 2005 Lunaria (Lila May Guptill)
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Post by BUNYIP on Apr 3, 2006 20:59:14 GMT -5
Hi Lun!Good concept for that day. Well put together with good ryhme and continuence. Interestng read. We don't have a 4th of July. We have a 26th Jan re Australia Day. It's to do with Australia becoming an Autononmy from British full Rule in 1910 (I think so anyway. LOL ) regards Bunyip[/b][/i][/size][/color]
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Post by lunaria on Apr 3, 2006 21:31:14 GMT -5
Thanks Bunyip. We separated from the British on July 4, I think anyway too.
We need a poem for Jan 26th.
LUN.
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Post by tsis on Jul 11, 2006 3:39:39 GMT -5
An excellent write
Luv, Tsis
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Post by lunaria on Jul 24, 2006 11:15:11 GMT -5
Thanks Tsis.
Luv, Lun.
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